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Monday, 11 December 2017

The adventurous adventures of eevee. By callum murphy
(rain falls heavily down like bricks)
“I wonder when this rain is gonna end” says dusk in a wondrous accent “yeah it’s been like this for nearly the whole day” says flame  “hey everybody who wants juice” say’s blizz.
“Yeah i could go for some juice” i say” “nooooo!” shout’s blizz we all run in the living room “what’s wrong!” we all say


“We’re outta juice” cries Blizz
“Do you know what this mean’s Blizz” as i stand there……. “no?” says Blizz     
“Well we must take another quest to the supermarket!,it.   may hard there will be danger but we have each other”


We burst out the door ready for anything i pull out the twenty buck’s “alright guy’s let’ssssss goooooo!!!” i shout  
We start walking on the side of the road more rain falls down like bricks “whoa guys look it’s the glass mountain of destiny” i say in disbelief  ‘whoa,yeah,cool,meh” says the other Eevee’s.
Eve our youngest sister was excited and was running around and ran into a wizard “oh,s-sowy sir” say’s eve our youngest    but the man did not listen he just turned around and said
“Oh hello dere”


“Everymon run!!!” i shout everybody starts yelling and screaming

But we sprint all the way down the street guy’s i-i see it i see the supermarket but then a fight burst out against Dusk and

Dawn “no i need the apple,i should have the apple i'm the cutest!!!!!” “guy’s guy’s guy’s stop!!!!!!!! Were gonna get caught by the monster’s i whisper     “ahhh guy’s i can see red eye’s are you sure we’re safe in here remember that we eevee’s are there  favorite food
(gurgling and grumbling) “wh-who’s there i-i have stick with  poop on it!” i shout with fear “le-lets just get outta here guys!” says eve trembling “is that food i be smelling” shouts a monster    
“Everybody run!!!” say’s bolt we run from a hoard of  monsters  i run as fast as my little paw’s can go but we come across a raging river.  boom! Crash! Rock’s fall
“Oh no what are we gonna do!” say’s dusk  

“Look guys if don't make it out alive i need to say something “yeah what is it” i-i'm the one who ate the last cookie!”    
“I knew it ugh” says blizz in disgust   

“Wait where’s vay?” says flare “wait look down there is vay!!!” i say

“Hey guys whats up!” says vay “we need to cross the river” says dawn
“Oh! Well that's easy’ says vay and then he raised a half destroyed bridge from the ground “woho,wow,cool,hoho,meh”  after crossing the bridge eve stops and  thanks vaporeon but vaporeon “Everybody attack!!!!” says blizz we attack him the wizard casting spells but we dodged them because we have quick attack!.    “Phew he ran away” says dusk….

“Guyzzz im having another spasm (flames flames everywhere) (more and more and more flames oh gosh it's-it's like a dragon)   
“Vay spray him with your water attack” says dawn “right (splash,splosh,splish) “(turkey noise aka water noise) phew thanks guy’s after that we kept walking and walking and walking and finally we come across a school “hey guys look it's a sandpit :/” points flare  

But it was not just a sandpit it was the eevee academy and you all know what happens in that sandpit it was our prison an- “eve what are you doing in the sandpit!!!” i shout “ya know it’s just a sandpit” says eve “it's not just any sandpit it’s a quick sandpit!” i say “wait what!” says eve as she sinks slowly “oma gosh eve! Your sinking” says jolt “(looks down) oh…………...ahhhhh” shouts eve “everybody tug!!” shouts dusk (we pull and pull and pull and pull and finally eve was out “phew thanks guy’s” says eve in relief  

“Well we to the supermarket” says bolt  “levitate powers go!!!” i shout  the we start to fly because the ground was melting for some reason but


                                       Finally
We made it to the supermarket
We pick the juice up slap that on the counter “four boxes for twenty bucks please” i say “but you guys are eevee’s you shouldn't drink juice that fast” says the clerk
said it’s fine.

“Thanks vay” says eve thankfully “no problem and don't menchine it” says vaporeon  “eevee you coming!!!!” shouts dusk       “coming!,bye vaporeon” says eve   “bye :3” says vay
After minutes of walking that felt like hours we came across a choice of “get your own juice here on the left or market on right”

“All in favor for juice is………..2 and market is 3 ok market it is” i say  we walk on to find a very weird person its that wizard again
“Wapow wapow wapow” says the wizard “ahhh sirrrr are you ok” i question him “WAPOW!!!!!” says the wizard  magic burst every ware rainbows,unicorns,
“Yeah we did it!!” we all shout

Then we just took a taxi back to the house “yay we got juice” (we got home then) “hey guys!,what,we already still got four more boxes of juice :/” says blizz

“What!!!!!!!!!!!!” we all shout     
    
           The end:/

3 comments:

  1. You've got a unique imagination Callum. I never thought that a story about a quest would be based on a trip to the supermarket. One thing I would like you to go back and do is make sure all the character names and the beginning of sentences have capital letters.

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    1. thanks mr baty for the advice ill be sure to do that in the next stroy that i make but ill edit it if i can :)

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  2. it makes me happy to see da xshreck

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